Thursday, December 8, 2016

College Writing 2 ePortfolio Project

Reflection:

From the beginning of the semester, this course has not been an average writing class for me. At first, when hearing about the assignments we were going to have throughout the semester, I was not too comfortable taking this class. I came in thinking this class was going to strictly be hearing lectures and writing papers throughout the semester, however it was much more than that. One of the key things I learned in this course was that there are multiple different ways you can express your mind and it is not just by writing a paper. From making multimodals to using blogging and social media, I learned there is a lot more to writing than just writing. Making a multimodal was perhaps my favorite assignment from this course as I learned to express my mind without using a single word. It all began with this link that I used to help me create a project that I will always appreciate. Although I was uncomfortable with this class at first, I learned to really appreciate it. I will continue to use the things I learned throughout the semester to voice my mind because I feel this was a great deal of what the class was about.

What have I learned?

I feel one of the most important thing I learned this semester was noticing how writers get to their readers. Of course it is done in more ways than one, but they all truly revolve around logos, pathos, and ethos. Using these appeals in my paper, I learned to argue my point at a higher level while backing up my points with evidence, rather than just saying what is on my mind. This taught me that if I could tap into my reader's emotions it becomes much more simple to get my argument across. This link also really helped me learn how to summarize without being bias in my writing. I will take many things away from this course but the simple things are what I believe really improved my writing and will help me going forward.

Breakthrough Moment!

My breakthrough moment in this course was when we were assigned to write a summary on "An Art Museum Designed for Taking Selfies". Although this was later on in the semester, I believe this was when I really got the hang of things. I was able to identify when the writer used logos, pathos, and ethos and use them to construct a well written summary. It was also in this assignment where I learned how to correctly use MLA Format and much of that was thanks to this link

To my future self,

As you have learned, just as there are many forms of writing, there are multiple ways to voice your mind. If you took one thing away from this course, whether it be through writing, social media, pictures, or even multimodals, I hope it's that you never stop voicing your opinion. #CollegeWriting2





Rational Argument on Colin Kaeprnick's Protest

Below is my rational argument on Colin Kaepernick's protest. Throughout writing this paper I have realized people have been so caught up in Kaepernick taking a knee during the national anthem that they have not noticed all the good that has come out of his protest. His pledge of a million dollars to aid communities in need is just the beginning of it. With all the research I have done over this topic I came to the conclusion that Colin Kaepernick deserves our respect for risking his career to bring awareness to an issue that still exists today. #istandwithKaepernick

Colin Kaepernick Protests The National Anthem

          I am a huge football fan, but somethings in life are bigger than football and sports in general. Colin Kaepernick, San Francisco 49ers quarterback, seems to understand this as he shook the football nation when he decided not to stand for the national anthem. At first I was confused as to why he would do this because of the disrespect such an act could generate especially to the veterans who have served our wonderful country. After the game Colin Kaepernick was surrounded by the media and he stated, he did not want to show pride in a country that opposes “people of color” (Wyche). This resulted in mixed reactions from football fans around the world. He received boos and death threats from many football fans around the country but it has not stopped him from continuing on with his protest. I believe many people did not initially receive the message he was trying to send out. Kaepernick received death threats all over social media, however we should be not be hung up over what he is doing, but rather why he is doing it. Colin Kaepernick started this protest to bring awareness to a problem that unfortunately still exists in our country today, racism.
            While some people admit that racism does in fact still exist, for many others, well the truth hurts. I could see why it could be difficult to support a man who does not stand for the national anthem which represents freedom and the lives of so many who fought for it. Many people around the country thought the same thing as they sent him death threats for his protest. Macguire points this out in his article, when Kaepernick is asked about the possibility of someone acting upon their threats Kaepernick replies by saying, “To me, if something like that were to happen, you’ve proved my point, and it will be it will be loud and clear for everyone why it happened, and that would move this movement forward at a greater speed than what it is even now. There's a lot of racism disguised as patriotism in this country. And people don't like to address that. And they don't like to address what the root of this protest is." Many people have not realized the backlash Colin Kaepernick has received from his protest defends his argument (Macguire). Pathos is used here because this is directed at the emotion of the audience. People start to understand that Kaepernick is willing to sacrifice his life to bring awareness to this issue. Ethos is used is McCam’s article when he shows Kapernick stating, “I am not going to stand up to show pride in a flag for a country that oppresses black people and people of color. To me, this is bigger than football and it would be selfish on my part to look the other way. There are bodies in the street and people getting paid leave and getting away with murder” (McCarn). At first I questioned why Kaepernick sat for the anthem, but then I started to read into it and what he was protesting for. It is clear that police brutality, inequality, and racism do in fact still exist and Kaepernick is doing the right thing by bringing awareness to these issues. I also believe you are being controversial if you are saying he does not have the right or should be killed for not standing up for something that symbolizes free rights. Logos is used in Park’s article when she points out Kaepernick saying that veterans fight for his right to stand or take a knee for the national anthem. Many people were surprised because of the support he received from veterans as #istandwithKaepernick and #veteransforKaepernick was trending all over social media. One veteran tweeted, “stop deliberating trying to miss the message by crucifying the messenger” (Park).
          As Colin Kaepernick continued to receive support from the political world, players and fans started to support his stance as well. From week to week more players around the league as well as from other sports started to join his protest (Sandritter). Michael Bennet, an NFL player on the Seattle Seahawks stated, “You need a white guy to join the fight. The white guy is super important to the fight,” Seahawks defensive end Michael Bennett said. “For people to really see social injustices, there must be someone from the other side of the race who recognizes the problem, because a lot of times if just one race says there’s a problem, nobody is realistic about it. At the same time, I see why they probably wouldn’t, because they don’t know what we’re going through” (Scott). I thought logos and ethos were used in this article because people would indeed pay more attention to the protest if it had people who are not minorities defending the minorities and showing they too notice that inequality is still an issue today. I also believe people are ethically responsible to stand up for what is going on as opposed to staying away from the situation but just as Bennet said, they really do not know what “people of color” are going through. Although I do not see how some people do not notice that this is an issue, whether you do or do not everyone should at least be open minded about the situation and think maybe there is really a problem going on and what they could do to help.
            What I have mostly respected about Colin Kaepernick’s protest is the fact that he has not just brought attention to the matter but he has also put his money where his mouth is. Colin Kaeprnick made a million dollar pledge to help communities in need, he stated, “I've been very blessed to be in this position and to be able to make the kind of money I do," Kaepernick said. "And I have to help these people. I have to help these communities. It's not right that they're not put in a position to succeed or given those opportunities to succeed” (Wagner McGough). As Colin Kaeprnick’s protest expanded, his jersey sales skyrocketed and his jersey became the top seller in the league. He responded by saying, "It was something that the jersey sales jumped because of people's belief that there can be change and we can make this country better and that they believe I was someone who can help that change," For me, that support is something I have to give back to the communities for that cause because that's what their belief is, that's what my belief is and we can work towards a common goal” (Rovell). Ethos is used here because the article shows Kaepernick’s good character with him making these donations and it causes people to see that maybe Kaepernick does have the right intentions by doing this.
            By trying to bring positive change to the world, Colin Kaepernick is just one of many professional athletes that try to use their platform to bring attention to problems in communities. A report states that athletes “make the case that sports can and should be a vehicle for progressive social change.” People often say leave politics outside of sports, but for these athletes to get their messages out there, using their platforms is the best possible scenario (Kaufman). Many people did not appreciate the fact that Kaepernick decided to take a knee for the national anthem but his protest was executed peacefully and with respect. Kaepernick initially sat during the national anthem, then decided to take a knee because it showed more respect. People say he could have done something else to protest, but what is a bigger stage to make his protest then during a song that is played and televised before every game nationwide. Kaepernick chose to make his stance during the national anthem because of the amount of attention it would receive so he could use that attention to bring awareness to his cause and start a conversation on how this issue could be worked out and it has been working tremendously. People need to pay less attention to him taking a knee and concentrate on what it stands for (Kaufman).
            All in all, Colin Kaepernick will have supporters and he will have critics. However everyone needs to look at the many positives that have come out of Kaepernick’s protest. It is clear that “people of color” have been mistreated and we should respect that Colin Kaepernick is sacrificing his football career and his life for a greater cause, because by him taking a knee he is standing up for an issue that unfortunately still exists in the world today (Wyche).    







Work Cited
Hill, Tim. “Colin Kaepernick on Death Threats: If I’M Killed ’You‘ve proved my point.’” The Guardian. The Guardian, 21 Sept. 2016. Web. 5 Dec. 2016.
Kaufman, Peter, and Eli A. Wolff. “Playing and Protesting: Sport as a Vehicle for Social Change.” Journal of Sport and Social Issues (2010): Web. 7 Dec. 2016.
Macguire, Eoghan. “Colin Kaepernick: Quarterback Says He Has Received Death Threats.” CNN. CNN, 22 Sept. 2016. Web. 5 Dec. 2016.
Park, Madison. “#VeteransForKaepernick Trends as Vets Defend NFL Player.” CNN. CNN, 31 Aug. 2016. Web. 5 Dec. 2016
Sandritter, Mark. All the athletes who joined Kaepernick’s national anthem protest. SBNation.com, 11 Sept. 2016. Web. 5 Dec. 2016.
Scott, Nate, Alysha Tsuji, and Andrew Joseph. “Seahawks’ Michael Bennett: ‘You need a white guy’ to Join Anthem Protests.” USA TODAY, 23 Sept. 2016.
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Wagner-McGough, Sean. Sean Wagner-McGough. CBS Sports, 2 Sept. 2016. Web. 5 Dec. 2016.
Wagner-McGough, Sean. Sean Wagner-McGough. ESPN, 7 Sept. 2016. Web. 5
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Wyche, Steve. Colin Kaepernick explains why he sat during national anthem. NFL.com, Web. 5 Dec. 2016.


                



Sunday, December 4, 2016

Colin Kaepernick Praises Fidel Castro?

Colin Kaepernick turned around many heads again when discussing politics. This time he was defending Fidel Castro who had just passed away. Many people questioned how he could support the dictator that had been compared to Stalin and Mussolini during his time dictating Cuba. Snoop Dogg who respected his protest against the national anthem came out and said, "He's sort of kind of hypocritical in so many words because he's pushing this, but at the same time he’s giving credit for this and this is the same abuse that [Cubans] been taking" Snoop Dogg was referring to how Kaepernick was standing up for African Americans who were being unjustly treated in America but supporting how Castro treated many of his people in Cuba. Kaepernick came out and said, “Yes it was completely out of context. Once again, what I said was I support the investment in education. I’ve never said that I support the oppressive things that he did,” This was important for Kaepernick to say because with him defending abuse on  African American's it would be hypocritical of him not to value everyone's lives equally as he tries to make positive change in the world. 

Cubs World Series Champions

It has been little over a month but I have yet to blog about the Cubs first World Series Championship in 108 years. The Chicago Cubs over came all odds by coming back down from 3-1 against the Cleveland Indians in the World Series to force a Game 7 that turned out to be the game of a lifetime. After winning in extra innings the Cubs made history and the city of Chicago celebrated like never before. The atmosphere in Wrigleyville was beyond electric and absolutely insane. Even though it has already been a month the Chicago Cubs winning the 2016 World Series will never get old.

Monday, November 21, 2016

Thanksgiving

Thanksgiving is just a few days away and families will get together to have their best meals of the year. What started off as a holiday to celebrate the Pilgrims in 1621 has evolved into a national tradition where families get together and enjoy some turkey with other great sides. This holiday really symbolizes the definition of being thankful because it reminds us how blessed we are to be able to put these meals on the table while others around the world do not have it so easy. As Thursday gets closer we should all enjoy the holiday but also remember to be thankful for what we have. #HappyThanksgiving

Friday, November 11, 2016

Presidential Election

The result of the presidential election surprised millions of people around the country. Although Hillary Clinton won the popular vote, Donald Trump received more electoral votes and will be America's next president. Many people were left heart broken and questioning how this could happen as Donald Trump pulled off perhaps the biggest upset in presidential election history. All the polls had Hillary winning and many had her dominating this race, but Trump came out as the winner in this election. The reason people felt so distraught and went out to protest following the election is because Trump as Bernie Sanders said, "ran his campaign on bigotry". Trump has said many racial things during his campaign and people do not believe he can be the face of our country. However, the presidential election has come and gone and whether we like it or not Donald Trump won and will be our next president. We owe him a chance to lead the country and must support him because we need him to do good for our country to do good.





Sunday, November 6, 2016

Semester Review

Throughout the semester I have benefited in this course in numerous ways. This has not been your ordinary English class. Although we have done writing assignments that I believe have improved my writing skills, I also appreciate the class discussions that we have that allow us to voice our opinions on things going on in the world. I also enjoyed doing the multi-model project because I learned how to explain a my ideas on a problem in other ways than just writing about it. When I came into this course I thought it was going to improve my writing ability but I am pleased to say it has done much more than just that.